Saturday, May 6, 2017

RIDING ALONG IN MY AUTOMOBILE

by Danna Shirley

Writing assignment: Sitting on a porch swing; what do you see? I wrote from the perspective of the person driving by and looking at the house with the porch swing…

Related imageIt was an isolated two-lane road but the country sights were breathtaking. A lush layer of green dominated her color palate; there were fields of crops and cattle, wildflowers, and old country homes. There were also quaint farmhouses with children happily playing outside; a little boy bouncing a ball and an older girl swinging from the limb of a huge oak tree.
Another farm showed a grandmother and daughter sitting on the porch in rockers and other siblings playing with puppies on the grass. It was the end of the day and probably the end of a very hard week.
            Yes, these people might have looked poor by contemporary standards but now she had to ask herself, who exactly was poor? The families along this road or the families who could afford fancy cars, a big house, and all the electronic trappings for their children?
The father spending time outside playing ball with his son or the businessman who could provide everything for his family but was never there to enjoy it with them.
The mother who spent more time shopping with friends than with her own children or the mother sitting on the porch swing with her daughter engaged in girl talk and laughing?
The child who could walk a mile to the country store in safety and pick a fresh apple off a tree along the way or the child who was chauffeured everywhere barely putting his foot on terra firma.
The scales of prejudice were falling from her eyes and for the first time she questioned, who exactly was underprivileged? It just might not be southerners. She was mesmerized by these thoughts as she gazed wide-eyed at a lifestyle she had never even imagined. Even though these country folks seemed to be years behind her own existence in New York, they were probably happier than any frenzied family she knew in the rat race up north. They weren’t stressed over deadlines or production quotas, sales meetings or client dinners, and she was slowly beginning not to care about them herself.
She began to wonder how a city girl might fit in down here? Or maybe the question to ask was, how would she ever be happy back in New York after experiencing the Eden of Alabama? No problem. She wouldn’t even try. Alabama was now home for her.

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